To be honest, the book’s been done-ish for a while now, and the paperback version has been available for purchase for over a week. However, it’s not until last night that I uploaded the last and final version of the book, both for the ebook and paperback versions.
I sent out print copies of my book to friends, family, and beta readers. When my friend D got hers she tore into it with a vengeance, and she discovered plenty of things I’d missed. I thought my sister had caught it all when she sent me a list of well over forty different things she wanted me to consider.
Turns out that wasn’t all of it.
D identified an issue with my comma usage that both I and my sister had missed. She also located all instances where I’d got my commas wrong throughout the entire story. That’s a whole lot of work, and I’m both impressed and grateful.
I’d have been happy releasing the book in the state it was in, but now that I got these issues pointed out I went ahead and changed most of them. In a handful of places I kept the incorrect punctuation for artistic reasons.
There were other issues as well, but I won’t bore you with the details. The main point is that I’ve now fixed or considered all of the errors that were pointed out to me, and that I’ve uploaded the final version of the story.
Then, once that was done and the paperback version had cleared the review, I uploaded it again because of a typography error on one of the first pages.
That’s the last of it though. This time I really believe I won’t be making any more changes to the book. I may change the category keywords or the blurb, but that’s another matter.
The final (!) version of the book can be found on Amazon here (US) and here (UK)
The free book giveaway I’m taking part in ends today. There’s a total of 35 books taking part and you can download them for free from this page. Some of the downloads are previews, like mine, while others are complete stories. There are even a few story collections.
Go ahead, get it while it’s still there.
EDIT: Looks like the creator of the giveaway forgot to set an expiration date so it’s still going. I’m taking my book down on Sunday the 28th though.
If you’re just finding my blog for the first time, my book is called Emma’s Story and it’s the one with the trees and snow on the cover (see below). It’s not the full story though, just the first four chapters. I’m hoping it will be enough for readers (that’s You) to get a feel for my writing style and to get an idea of what the story is about.
The style is probably a little bit out of the ordinary, and not everyone will like it. The narration switches back and forth between two different kinds of voice. There’s a close third person voice written in past tense, and there’s a distant omniscient voice written in present tense.
If that doesn’t make sense to you, download the free preview and check it out. You’ll either love it or hate it.
Obviously I want you to like it, but I know it’s not everyone’s cup of tea. In that way, I’m kind of happy I was able to give the book away like this. It’s an opportunity to show off the story to potential readers without them having to make a commitment to buying it.
Imagine you buy a book you think sounds interesting and then the style it’s written in just doesn’t work for you at all. One of my beta readers told me the style felt condescending to them, and they’re probably not the only one. Other beta readers really enjoyed it though, so I kept the style the way it is.
If you already checked out the preview, or if you’re curious about it after just reading about the different styles. Let me know in the comments.
Emma wants what all young anfylk women want, a burrow in the village and a family to fill it with life – and she could have it. Her best friend Torkel has proposed. He’s the only one for her and he’s first in line for the only available burrow in their small hillside village.
It should be easy, but it’s not. Torkel is a dreamer and a scoundrel. A self-styled huntsman and adventurer, with no real grasp of what it means to be a father and a husband.
But time is ticking, and the longer the burrow lies empty the weaker the village’s spirit gets. When an angry bear comes down from the mountains to terrorize their forest the villagers are unable to ward it off on their own.
To seek aid, Emma must travel farther than she’s ever been on her own before. A journey in search of the help her village needs, and the answers her heart desires.
While she’s gone, Torkel has his own ideas for how to impress Emma and make her like him enough to be his wife, completely missing the point. There’s a reason she has a hard time making up her mind…
Okay, so that’s a bit of a chunky blurb, but it does sum up the essence of the story in an honest way without giving away too much.
No, I don’t have a link for where to buy it just yet, but it won’t be long – a few days at most. The reason for the delay is that before the book becomes available for purchase Amazon has to review and approve it, which can take up to 72 hours.
It’s on it’s way though. Soon…
So how did I publish my book by accident? Isn’t that something I should have put some thought into and planned carefully?
Yes, yes it is, and I have, mostly.
The eBook version of my book is currently up for pre-order and is still set to be released on the 2nd of February. I have a few promotions scheduled and they’re still going ahead as planned.
What I didn’t realise is that KDP (the publishing service) doesn’t provide any pre-order functionality for paperback versions.
Yesterday I got the final cover image for the book. I was really excited about it (I still am), and I spent the entire evening – and well into the night – setting up the book for print. This would be enough for a blog post on its own, as I made some interesting mistakes and learned a few things for the future.
The important thing is I got it done and at a little before two in the morning I had approved the preview of the print on demand version of the book. I sorted out the pricing for the various Amazon market places, and I clicked the Save & Publish button.
After that I just sat there staring at the screen.
It slowly dawned on me that I hadn’t set a date for the book to be available, and there hadn’t been anything about it being published at the same time as the eBook. A little bit of searching and a few questions to people in the know soon confirmed there really is no pre-order for paperbacks.
When I clicked that button it was the signal for Amazon to start the process of reviewing the book for publishing. Once they’ve checked that it fulfils all of their requirements the book will be available for purchase.
This wasn’t what I’d planned, but now that the ball is in motion I’ll roll with it (pun intended). Someone told me they release the paperback early and treat it as a soft-launch before their eBook goes live. They use it as a way to try and get some reviews in time for the main launch, and I think I’ll do the same.
Once the link to purchase the book is available I’ll tell my friends about it and badger them into reviewing it for me. Also, I’ll obviously share it here too.
But what about the cover image?
Yeah, it’s done. I’ve got it. It’s amazing. Even then, I’ll still wait until the paperback can be purchased to share it here. Just a little longer. A day or two. Until then, here’s a teaser image with a quote from the book using the back cover image as a background:
I wrote in my last post about how I joined a free books giveaway. It’s a promotion where writers get together and offer readers free copies of their books, or (like in my case) previews of their books. You’ll find the giveaway here.
I’m really happy with how this has worked out for me. Readers have downloaded previews of my book, and a few of them even signed up for my newsletter – which is awesome. I don’t know if any of them actually read the book, or if they just downloaded it because it was free, but for the time being I’m just happy so many people choose to claim a copy for themselves.
Maybe they’ll read it at some point?
What I didn’t think about, and didn’t expect, was that I would be able to see how many times the other books in the giveaway had been claimed too – not just mine. In this way, I can see how my book is doing compared to everyone else’s. Specifically, I can compare the strength of my book’s cover and blurb against those of the other books.
When I first logged in on the giveaway page and saw my book among all of the others it struck me how dazzling and impressive all of the other cover images were. I felt like I was way out of my depth with my plain and simple cover I’d made myself from a stock photo I’d bought for ten bucks.
Some of the other authors in the giveaway will have spent a lot more money on their covers.
For the most part they look exactly the way cool, sexy, action packed Fantasy and Science Fiction books are supposed to look. Now, this may sound as if I’m mocking the other covers, but I’m really not. This is what works, and what sells, and what readers expect. Don’t underestimate reader expectations. If I were to mock anything, it’d be the concept of the standard SFF book cover in itself, but that’s a blog post for a different day (and probably for a different blog too).
Basically, what I wanted to say is that I looked at my own cover next to all the others and I felt a bit insufficient, or perhaps jealous. It’s like I was a kid and my toys weren’t as cool as the other kids’ toys, or something like that.
In the end though, it didn’t seem to matter to the people claiming free books from the giveaway. I just did a check on the page and the number of books that have more claims than mine, is slightly lower than the number of books that have less claims than mine. My book is almost smack in the middle of the field, and I really can’t complain about that.
Please note, this isn’t a competition, and this isn’t a call for my friends to go claim my book just to increase the number. That’d just ruin things for me. The satisfaction comes from knowing there are people out there, who don’t know me at all, who have chosen to claim my book based on the cover alone.
Well, there’s also the blurb. It’s a nice enough blurb, but that’s also a topic for another blog post (on this blog).
Finally, I’d like to point out that I have another cover on the way. It’s being painted and designed by a good friend of mine, and I’m really excited about getting to show it off to the world – hopefully next week already.
I’ve been getting some feedback on the promo print of Emma’s Story I sent out to friends and family. Most of the ones I heard from pointed out the same few things – which means I really ought to fix them, right?
I’d written here instead of her (once), and there instead of their (also once). In two places I’d double up a word and written it twice in a row.
Then there’s my blessed little sister who’s got an attention to detail that’s out of this world. She sent me a list of over fifty different things I ought to review.
Some of these were obvious mistakes that I and everyone else had missed, and these were easy. Others were related to matters of style and those were more difficult. Do I change something to ensure it’s grammatically correct, or do I leave it as it is because it matches the feel of the story?
For the most part I stuck with what I’d written. Style trumped rigour – if that’s what you call it?
I’m still waiting for comments from one more person who said she had some suggestions, but other than that the content of the book is done. Once I hear back from her and review her suggestions I won’t change the text anymore.
The only other thing that remains is the cover.
That too is being taken care of, and it shouldn’t be too long until I have that sorted as well. Once I do, I’ll set up the print version of the book so that those who want to read on paper can do that.
Then there’s the matter of promotion, but that’s a different beast entirely…
I’m taking part in a giveaway on instafreebie.com. I’ve joined a group giveaway with a bunch of other authors in the hope of getting potential readers to download the free preview of the book, and in doing so also signing themselves up for my mailing list.
The giveaway starts on Wednesday and will run for a little over two weeks. I’ll write another post about it here once it’s begun. I don’t know if the other authors taking part are including full books or if it’s all previews, but I’m going to try and link and share it regardless.
It feels a bit weird to sign up for joining something like that without having a mailing list to share the promotion with. It’s like I’m basically freeloading on the others. I guess in the future I’ll ave to try and pay it forward to someone else who’s just starting out and don’t have a lot of subscribers on their mailing list.
TLDR: I’m releasing Emma’s Story on Amazon in February. The work on the Lost Dogs series is progressing nicely. Marketing is scary.
In this case “ages” means about two months. That’s how long it’s been since I last posted here. It’s time for an update, because there are things to talk about but first a bit of self promotion…
To begin with. I’ve finally gotten around to setting a release date for Emma’s Story. You can pre-order the eBook version of the story here. There’s also a free preview of the first four chapters available on InstaFreebie, here.
As I’m writing this it’s about a month left until the book becomes available to the public, but I’m already excited, and last I checked there were three pre-orders already. Admittedly, at least one of them is from a friend who doesn’t even have an e-reader and who’ll order the print-version of the book as well, but still.
It’s cool to see that it’s working and that things are happening.
The first draft of the book is still available for free here on my website, on this page. That version is 13 chapters, while the final version going up on Amazon is 17 chapters, so there’s a bit of a difference. Overall the story is the same though. You’re welcome to read the first draft, but it’s not as good as the final version.
About that update?
So, yes, things have happened.
Last I wrote, I was about a third of the way through my writing sabbatical, and I’d finished the first draft of the first two stories. It was still warm enough I could sit outside and write as long as I dressed warm enough and brought my blanket and it didn’t rain.
That’s all changed.
The sabbatical is over since two weeks, and it’s cold enough I even have to dress warm while sitting at my own desk at home (I’m too cheap to turn on the heating). I’m burning a lot of stories, and the writing is a bit slower – but I’m still making progress.
Back then I’d finished the first draft of the first two stories in the Lost Dogs series. I’ve now finished the first draft of two more stories, and the second draft of the first one. The first story has been sent out to beta readers, but I’ve not heard much back from any of them so I’m going to have to start chasing them down about it.
I’m currently working on the second draft of the second story, and I’m making decent progress. The last few days have been busy with setting up for the launch of Emma’s Story, but as most of that is now done I’m able to get back to writing again – or editing, as it were.
I also had some advice from a member of the publishing/marketing group I’m part of that indicates that my plan for my stories is sound. What they told me is they’re writing all of their stories in the same setting, and they’re doing a lot of short stories about side characters from their longer novels and such. Apparently it’s working out for them, and as it’s very similar to what I’m planning to do I found it very encouraging.
Setting up for the launch of Emma’s Story has gotten me to think a lot about marketing lately. It’s been daunting, but I’m slowly warming up to it. I’ve got a mailing list (sign up here), and I’ve ordered two promotions. I know of someone who’s doing a newsletter who’ll hopefully include me, and I’ve been in touch with two people running fantasy pages on FB that may also come in handy.
I still haven’t sent out a newsletter as I don’t have any subscribers yet, but who knows what’ll happen. I’m really concerned about spamming people with useless crap they don’t want, so I probably won’t send anything unless there’s a new release coming up.
Finally, it’s kind of nice to be back to work after all that time off. It was great to have twelve weeks free, but there’s a comfort in having the daily routine of going to the office as well. Unfortunately, work requires a lot of time so it’s a steep price for that daily routine. It’d be cool to work part time. I don’t expect to be able to do that this year though – maybe next.