In my last post I wrote about rewriting a conversation without changing any of the words the characters say. I did it, and it worked pretty well. It’s not perfect, but I feel it’s good enough to call the experiment a success.

If I wanted to, I could put in some more time and effort and iron out the last creases, but I won’t. It’ll be easier to just tweak the lines the characters say and it’ll do. After all, it was just an experiment, and there’s no particular reason to keep the words the exact same.

If you’re interested (it’s super interesting, promise) you can read the different versions here.